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So, for the "redecorating a room" square on the Public Activities Card for Fresh Starts Bingo Fest, I originally wrote a Lai, but after two versions I still wasn't very happy with it. After leaving it alone for awhile, I went back and wrote a Nonet for the square as well, that I like a lot better. I'm going to post them both here for you to see, and if anyone has any critiques or feedback (especially on the Lai), I'd be more than happy to hear them.

New Style
a lai

Pictures taken down
to be moved around.
New style,
modeled off a gown;
colours will abound.
A trial;
perfect balance found
'tween bright hues and brown,
it's final.

Changing Things Up
a nonet

It's springtime and change is in the air.
The curtains are looking tired
and the paint is wearing thin.
Swap plain brown for bright blue,
to let more light in.
Soft yellow walls
and new art;
it's a
start.
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