I'm glad the edit worked. I was a little iffy about it and it took some thinking, but I managed to come up with a line that I thought fit in even though it was an add-on. And yes, I decided to keep the original because the first three lines are how it popped into my head, and writing is a process so I figured a look at all of it wouldn't hurt anything.
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Date: 2020-11-03 03:48 am (UTC)